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Im your tree, be my axe

Your toch is my joyfull pain,
your kiss causes my eyes to rain,
the tears of blood.

the blood youv sucked from my broken tattered
torn heart ,this is the soul that youv battered
your sapoes love.

The words I love you crawled out your mouth, this heart youll take
your hells ospring, my omen i pray for gods sake
that youll just disapear.....

your my lover, my death,
youv sucked my soul
stoll it for your slef.
what a selfish basterd.

i plead leave me, let me just die
i dont want to try
anymore, im dryed up a soulles corps.

your soulles corps, i love you...
I hate you i hate you your not true.
whyd you come into my life!

Disapear my my dream, a nightmare
tell me you hate me tell me you dont care.
i was you doll.

just whisper in my ear that youv deseaved me,
your the axe and im your tree.
cut me down rip off my skin

write on my flesh
strip my every being
DISTROY ME!!

I love you...
  please dont love me


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