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The First Christmas Day

Born in Bethlehem
asleep on the hay
the first Christmas day.

Author notes

I just hope we never forget
who's Birthday we are celebrating.

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  • Darc Soul 69
    December 20, 2008

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    i love this piece, you have done an amazing thing with this and your notes stand out as well. thank you for sharing and hope to see more like it from you in the near future


  • Mariana gold member
    December 19, 2008

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    This is beautiful. It has a 5,5,5 syllable count. I don't know if this was deliberate but I love it!

    Mariana

  • goalsv
    December 18, 2008
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    Amen! It is the whole reason we have the holiday.


  • Mari Goes gold member
    December 18, 2008

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    Your author notes is just something I left as comment few minutes ago. Yes, so many people forget the really meaning of Christmas, which is very sad.
    Nice poem you have here.
    Thanks and I wish you a very merry Christmas