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It's your fault.

It's your fault i was never happy,
it's your fault you made me whappy.

It's your fault that i was sad,
it's your fault you made me mad.

It's your fault you made me cry,
it's your fault you never said why.

It's your fault i slit my wrist,
it's your fault i won't be missed.

It's all your fault that i'm gone,
Never to come back as you got me wrong.

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  • The.poet.of.hearts
    February 25

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    I shall kill him


    by
    the poet of hearts and beautiful words

  • Scars
    December 22, 2008

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    it was a decent poem and particulary appreciate your rhyming schme, but b careful because sometimes when u concentrate on structure 2 much u lose those raw emotions. look foward 2 reading more


  • SilentTearsOnceMore
    December 18, 2008
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    thankyou


  • Shuberth
    December 18, 2008

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    oh i loved this one.... sad but very good poem... i like the rhymes and the way you put this into words...

    Shuberth


  • Syko Path
    December 18, 2008
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    i love you poem its very straight forward
    but yet not at the same time good!


  • She burns
    December 18, 2008
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    Sad and touching here, all the pain, as you blame him because he hurts you so much...


  • toxic-love
    December 18, 2008
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    amazing!!

    i loved it, and i feel this way at the minute tbh
    thanks, keep writting coz you got talent!! xD
    rawrr!!
    xxx

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