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I love to seclude myself in my childhood existence
away from the grown-up screams of living
I can focus on my surroundings
where that beautiful sound of well loved memories
open their worn strings of completion ~
whispering stories to each other.

I'm part of their world  
where the racket and fuss of reality fades into the background.

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  • Black Narcissus gold member
    December 18, 2008

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    I think I might join you it sounds lovely.
    "away from the grown-up screams of living"

    Very moving.

    Thanks for entering, it was a pleasure to read.


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    December 18, 2008

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    This is just gorgeous! Wonderful imagery and the metaphor is excellent.
    Best wishes in the contest.
    Gaylene


  • Ademon
    December 18, 2008

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    You've written some very beautiful pieces, but I'm thoroghly impressed by this one! Nicely penned my friend!