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a rose

pick a single rose
yellow it is in color
seems to mean so much

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decided to try a haiku. let me know what you think.

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  • Flowergirl
    January 14
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    love ti so little words can say so much geat work and keep it up.


  • Sadpuppet
    December 30, 2008

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    beautiful! so little words can explain so much. i love this. anything can mean everything to someone, they just have to truly care about it. wonderful write.

  • cindy4
    December 18, 2008
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    Nice haiku