Wrap me up so superficial,
make me what you dream me to be.
Show me off, play with me,
and place me back into my spot
where I belong.
I am here for your pleasure,
a little trophy for all to see..
amongst the waste of your other
"special toys"
I will bite me tongue,
play nice,
and act beautiful.
...I'm a good girl...
Author notes
Picture credit:
http://avril-images.net/
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt by Black Narcissus.
7000 points, ended December 20, 2008, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Well deserving of the Gold! Congrats my friend! beautiful poem!
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Wowzers ~
What an incredibly poem; I didn't look at the picture til the end because your words painted the picture line by line until it was finished - Flawless poem
Best of Luck
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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I see a golden shinney something in your future! best of luck!!!
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Ooooooooo this is just wonderful! I love the whole piece and yes the ending is excellent! I am assuming this is a metaphor and it works brilliantly.
Best wishes in the contest.
Gaylene
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this is very well written. good job and good luck
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All I can say is ' applause '.
Perfect interpretation of the picture.
...I'm a good girl...
Killer finish.
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