Lift up my skirt and bend me over
Spread my swollen lips then pull out your boner
French kiss my pussy with your dick
Make my sugar walls wet and slick
Fuck me hard against the wall
Pump me deep till I say ahhh...
Grab my hips and pull me back
Make me meow like an in heat kitty cat
Smack my ass while I cum
All over your dick and scrotum
On my knees I will drop
To suck your piece nonstop
Down my throat I'll take it all
While my chin gets slapped with your balls
Stroking your dick with my lips
Then drinking all your love serum from your tip
Author notes
Option 4
The picture used with this write I do not claim as my own.
A contest entry
- My first Quickie by Iridessa MoonFlower.
650 points, ended December 18, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Holy crap! I never knew women felt that way. The boldness of your words floor me. Thanks for being someone who can tell it just like it is. Erotica is something I shy away from, I always feel like if it comes from a man, somehow it gets debased by interprtation. How refreshing.... A woman's point of view!
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Very very nice indeed!
A real erotica full of genuine pleasures
I enjoyed it greatly -
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm girl you do have a way with words...
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WOW...
Damn girl after reading this I think I need to change my panties lmao.Very good very vivid and the images just pop up in ur head from the detailed descriptions... I might read it again ... and again lol.
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Un Equalled....jaw dropping good...
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I'll Give It; If You Got It!
This is some real hot poetry right here. I'm ready to give it to you all the rest of my days if I could. I like this poem from beginning to end and I will be reading this one again and again. Truth is, I'm a freak and I like this kind of kinky stuff. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
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Holy Shindig~
Oy! Girly what a piece You have penned that lights the monitor on fire
MEDIC!!
This is so HOT~ that my eyes are burning
You give the reader much to envision
Bravo!!
Excellent take on the prompt~Yep
Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Love it!
Thank You for sharing Your Heat and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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whore
this proves that we are certified whores the gold trophy its marvelous i love the picture to thief! that me and my piffy picture i am going to stil yours next time lmao 
i am kidding by the way i love it honey
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i don't read a lot of erotica
that was pretty intense.
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Wow! Don't know how I missed this one! Love it, love it, love it
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Wow, you do make it hot sweetie and never disappoint, soooo good as you know how.
Congrats on the well deserved Gold
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Wow! I really think you have some talent. I read your work before & ever so enjoyed it. I am honored that you joined in my very first quickie contest. ~~Iridessa~~
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MMMMMMMMMmmmmmmmmm!
I can see and feel and taste it happening!!
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Excellent
Oh my you did so great with this one. So very hot. Such a great job. Best of luck in the contest.
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