Lying on your back I caress your every curve
Passion, lust, love-combined in our whirlwind
Your eyes set fire within my soul, I'm throbbing
Every kiss, every touch you moan with pleasure
taking my hands, placing them on the small of your back
you begin to trace my lips with your fingers
you suck on your fingers slightly and groan,
My soul melts as my heart only beats for you
No longer two lovers we wish to be one
Our souls ignite and burst into flames
The passion we carry, penetrating, becoming one
The gods are envious of what we have
and yet we have only begun...
Author notes
" Seduce my senses with words of silken beauty"
Make me want to step into your write and bathe within its passionate virtue. Mesmerize my soul with words I've always longed to hear.
I think this poem goes right along the lines of you wanting to step into this poem...at least I hope so...
A contest entry
- Seduce My Senses With Words Of Silken Beauty. by Poetryintheblood.
550 points, ended January 8, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What is one thing that stood out in this poem?
Comments
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HOT HOT HOT *love*
VERY HOT... I love it...passion at its best! Very sentual and erotic...Love it! xoxo Miranda
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Aww wow! Thank you so much for the awesome comment! I'm really glad that you enjoyed this...i have two other ones... "United" and "Euphoric Sensations" these are my first 3 sensual writes ever...so it's something new for me! I'm really glad that you enjoyed this! Thank you for the great comment!!!
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gulp...well I'm going to um...go get cooler
C
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wow such panisite words it wants to make me melt keep up the work
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Thank you for the wonderful comment! means so very much to me!
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WOW!
This is fantastic!!! The writing is superb and what you are saying is steammmmyy!!! good job to say the least! -
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Thank you for the wonderful comment I hope that you find more of my Poetry just as superb, and a few of my other "steamy" writes as well, enjoy and god bless...thanks!
Aaron
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Excellent write here
Oh my goodness I am sure you will win with this poem you have penned a really great feeling of such passion Bravo
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Wow, steamy..and beautiful! Wonderful words of sensuality. Well done and best of luck!
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Thank you for your sensually beautiful write, and for making me want to step into it and breathe in its enticing essences, good luck in my contest, Josie
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I love how real and how you really bring truth to the words "making love". Do you write any shrt stories? Because I could imagin you having a talent for that as well. You know how to engage and enchant your audience,
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I've had a few people ask me about writing short stories and writing more poetry like this but honestly I think that I'm going to save some of this poetry writing for my "wife" she deserves to be spoiled in some way from my writings...I will more than likely write a few more as the time comes this year but I don't think I'll make a habit of writing sensual writes. I love the prompts and the ability to do so, and reading others, they give me inspiration and are really, really HOT lol
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Ah I know what you mean ts a personal thing. I write alot of poetry for my girlfriend but Ive only posted one. Its just feeling that I feel should be kept between me and her. And since it is your wife your writes must be 10 times more emotional and passionate.So I could see you wanting to keep alot of it to your self.
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haha no wifey yet but hopefully one day!
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oops lol misread the "wife" and I doubt it will take long you seem like such a nice guy
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Thats awesome. Very sensual, but still romantic. I like the idea of the gods being envious heh
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Wow, talk about steamy and sensual at the same time.. you managed to fog up my monitor.. the imagery is vivid.
excellent take on the prompt .. I'm kind of wondering why you didn't get anything for this, you should have.\
kat
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omg! I need a cold shower now! gee! you could have at least warned me! 
this was sensual and hot! I truly loved this write! and I'm sad that it didn't get anything! 
. should have gotten gold! a truly wonderful write hun.
Angel
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Becare of reading "united" then... lol
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Wow! Did I miss this one? My I know I would have given you the gold. Did I not judge my contest correct? I am totally disapponted in myself. How sad. I am sorry. ~~Iridessa~~
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Beautifully Sensual & Romantic!!!
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so passionate and tender and sensual. i too like the last 2 lines great write Jenn
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Not bad at all for just testing the waters...I love it!!!
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Beautiful work here! I love the last two lines in this one. Take care and all the best to you in this contest!
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Thanks Jeremy this is my first write such as this...so I'm kind of testing the waters you could say...
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I like it... Does your Lady know about this....
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ha-ha you're funny...
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De ja Vue...? Cold shower in my future.... I particualry am fond of...:"You begin (to) trace my lips with your fingers you suck on your fingers slightly and groan," Good luck in the contest!
becca
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Me like xxx
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ha-ha this is my first one so please go easy on the "Critiquing" ...lol Thank you for the compliments one and all!
Aaron
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