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Biking On Dirt Roads

Dusk sweeps in with its purple hued fingers
Surrounding the world in twilight
This is the moment I treasure the most
Riding bikes together down a dirt road
In the mountains, so far from everything

There is something mysterious in your smile
The way you look at me as if I'm something pretty
Something to be remembered
Something to be cherished

The road curves and I follow you
Down these wonderful paths that no one else knows
All the world is hushed
And peace is a place I have found

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  • letters to no one
    December 18, 2008

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    "it's" ---> "its"

    "All the world is hushed
    And peace is a place I have found"
    ^ really like this bit

    Good luck!