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Oh, Hollie!

'Tis the season of silver bells,
mistletoe, ice and snow;
but something's awry -
for the joy is gone from Hollie.

Oh, Hollie, dear - I wish you'd hear
the pleas, the cries, the prayers
made on your behalf...holly is so
important to this Christmas season,

And so are you, dear one.
That's why they named you Hollie,
your birth being in December.
You were born in the dark,

The darkest time of year;
you find yourself lost in the dark,
alone and plagued by self-doubt,
anxiety, and demons.

But hark!  Hear the cry:
"Prepare the way for the Lord!"
Your dawn is coming, Hollie -
you, you are Jerusalem.

The Lord your light is coming,
bringing you relief from your
sorrow and pain, to which I
easily relate, having the same past.

Oh, Hollie! I can't make you jolly
or glad; the peace you seek comes
from above and lies within you.
I pray for this to come swiftly, soon.

My Christmas prayer is that you will
still be there when I come back from
taking care of my sister and her family,
when the holidays are over this year.

May a new year bring you peace, hope,
and joy - a Love envelope you like
the morning fog that you are so used to -
For your soul and well-being, child blue.

Author notes

For Hollie, aka Broken Bambi.

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A contest entry

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  • StarEyes
    December 27, 2008

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    I love this! Sometimes we all are broken aren't we, but there is hope if we remember your words, and look to find peace, we shall be ok! what a great gift for Hollie!

    Congrats on the HM!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • glitterydoom
    December 23, 2008

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    awww thankyou so much for writing me this, I cant believe I didnt read it before, I must have missed it in my messages :/
    but this is amazing, thankyou
    x


  • Crazy-Love
    December 18, 2008
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    A very nice dedication. Nicely written! Good luck and thank you for entering!

  • Sunshine Princess
    December 18, 2008
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    I like your poem thank you for writing have nice day


  • ASmileForYou
    December 18, 2008

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    Aww. This is a great dedication piece. It was very well written and I'm glad that you decided to enter it in the contest! I enjoyed reading it!


  • owlish
    December 18, 2008

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    I bet Hollie will absolutely love this piece. It's comforting and beautiful. Hollie is amazing, but she has to believe it. I think this is perfect.


  • Danna Hobart
    December 18, 2008

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    I have a step-sister who was born on December 25th and was named Holly Day. I also have a sister-in-law born on Christmas day, a sister born on the 17th, and 6 nephews all born this month.

    The Hollie in this poem sounds like a sad soul. I wish her peace and light for the holiday. Thank you for entering my contest.

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