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a room

everything is white
everything is white
there's a table in the middle
and a door in the floor
there's a painting on the ceiling
and a vase in the corridor

a candlestick in the corner
is covered by a veil;
the wick never burns
yet there's light all around

everything is white.
everything is white.

an albino spider
crawls across a strand of hair
it doesn't cast a shadow
and the strand of hair is fair

everything is white.
everything is white.

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