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As the snow drifts deeper



I listen to your tales
of Mexican winters
that leave blonde streaks in your hair

imagine myself leaned against you
on a nighttime beach
wrapped in tanned arms.




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  • Rowan gold member
    January 5
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    Nice... liked this alot. Congratulations.

  • momentum
    December 19, 2008
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    this isn't lame at all.

    i love it


  • AJ Morelli gold member
    December 18, 2008
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    cool... first stanza really rocks



    al


  • NurseChilly gold member
    December 18, 2008

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    ahem!!! mexico?? well give me a shot of too-kill-ya!! and i might have a guess at the crush
    very nice

    • thirdeye
      December 18, 2008
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      see i thought that might happen... lol

      no one from AP

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