Alone she struggles
underneath winter's
fairytale.
Graceful purity
solitudes peace
even so,
invisible emotion
lay dormant.
Without ornaments
she is
mediocrity fair.
Love forgot to
grow there,
left her remaining
bitter and bare.
Author notes
OPTION 3
http://jjuuhhaa.deviantart.com/art/Gele-49314349
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie! You Bored? by Sweet Impatience.
1500 points, ended December 19, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautifully written. I love the feeling and depth. Nicely done.
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wow... nicely done! I loved the way made it have feelings and the imagery was extremely well written.. congrats on the HM though on my track I would've given more
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an interesting write from the picture prompt.
the second stanza is very interesting ... usually, dormancy to me suggests weight, depth.
however, I see your point ... depth not tapped leads to sorrow.
thanks and congrats on the honorable.
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i know somebody like that all shiny on the outside but shes sad and cold inside. brillient write
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Haunting images laced with the cold of winter....very vivid!
Congrats on the HM!
Mariana*rose*
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A very stunning take on the pic-prompt...Nicely written, poet...
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Wonderful thoughts for this write.
Beautifully sad yet, a great piece.
Congrats on your trophy and thanks
for sharing it here!
Jeremy0826 -
Fantastic piece! Flows really well, and the imagery is superb! Bravo!!!
♥ Kathraina
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Oh my gosh I loved this. This was incredible, it should have been GOLD. I've taken to throwing bottles of champaigne at those who hold contests but don't give the proper trophies out.
I love this.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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Emotions flow like deep running water,
loving feelings lost in despair of life.
such depth you have recorded.
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I really love this poem. you did an outstanding job with the prompt. the imagery is beautiful. excellent
good luck
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solitudes peace............beautiful words Lisa
Good luck!
Steffany
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Both beautiful and tragic. This poem is a glimpse of what the absence of love can do... very insightful.
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aww, this is really sad and the images your words painted in ind were stunning. this is fantastic. keep penning
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Oh, I must strongly disagree...I must say that yours has beautiful imagery I love it!!!
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This is great good luck in the contest
you
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Wow... You have a fantastic vocabulary, and I hung onto your every single word like a drowning woman hangs onto a life-preserver. Great job, and good luck to you!
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Good luck
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