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the silence





in the photograph you are staring
off-screen, face closed

the sky, aching.

i remember how you were that morning,
alive.  i remember how you buttoned your coat, carefully,
opened the door.

maybe it’s catching

i am not that good at being sad,
too much understanding,

i follow a path,
your footsteps there, before me

this is what is important:
the living, the daily failures,

the body’s longing for itself





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  • Rowan gold member
    December 18, 2008

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    One day at a time. I like the feeling of sad acceptance in this. I'm with tara, this one sticks in ones mind; I love the slow buttoning.


  • tara wilson gold member
    December 18, 2008

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    quit often your poems & your voice leave me with a little shiver while reading, i like it when poetry has the power to do that

    • philosphyofkate
      December 18, 2008
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      Yes, most often it is something that is making me shiver. Better out than in.