The Father's spirit
alive in a virgin's womb
our Savior is born
In a list
A contest entry
- Christmas haiku by Mari Goes.
900 points, ended December 19, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A beautiful write
This is such a special write he is truly our all and all,Thank God for the Holy
Spirit a lovely conceipt of all the father did by sending His amazing son.
Just beauitful!
God Bless!
Sharon
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Sharon, thank you for reading this one. What would we be without Jesus? I don't want to find out!!
Mary
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Excellent
Wow! I never saw the Light from that facet before. This is like a diamond. So much value in such a small package! The title opened my eyes to see the picture.
Only great maturity, strength, and wisdom can bring forth the loving "child within" at just the right time. You know, the inn crowd still has no room for that kind of vulnerability.
Love the picture with the little points of light. A perfect fit. Thanks so much for sharing this profound concept in such a tiny package. It's just immaculate!
Mary Christmas to you and yours Sis,
Danny
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thank you Danny for a wonderful comment! I like the "Mary" Christmas!!!
Have a blessed and God-filled Christmas !!
Mary
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Just Priceless
Wow this is precious and so very true. I loved this picture with your beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing your gift to share the Lord and to write such beautiful poetry.
Wishing You A Fabulous & Happy New Year
Much Love Always,
Kelle Marie 
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very beutifully put, merry christmas
Evinde
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Beautifully said in three lines.
Hopefully all the people who celebrate Christmas remember to celebrate His birthday.
Thanks and I wish you a very merry Christmas
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Ah , An Adorable Christmas Haiku!
Something different from you sis...and I love it's title..very catchy as you catch our eye..and at this special time of year the special "Child" birth being our heavenly Savior....This is your forte' catching our attention....your gift writing it!
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