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In Prayer

Pray this is the final break
Nothing left to fake

Waited in your coroner
treated as a foriegner

Murder i wrote
Left without an anedote

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  • bigperm
    December 17, 2008
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    nice flow...

    this has a lyrical quality. It could be the chorus to a song.