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The Liar

The words you say roam in my mind.
To think I left it all behind.
You asked me again and again.
Yes or no?
Will it matter in the end?
You think it will, I think it won't.
Too many times I've told you "Don't"
You never listen to what I say.
Do you really want me to stay?
Your love, it kills me, it breaks me more.
That's why I sat there, upon the floor.
How do I know you really care?
Were you asked? Or were you dared?
I'm tired and sick of all your lies.
I've seen right through your stupid disguise.
Get out of my face.
You're a big disgrace.
I hope someday you'll figure out,
How much the world may make you pout.
Go fool another girl with your charm.
But this time, she will do harm.


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