Trapped within your beauty
My love the beauty in you is endless.
It's a deceiving beauty as you are not as you seem.
The outside is just a reflection of the inside.
I need you for you are the most beautiful.
You’re eyes are as the full moon on a clear night.
Gleaming in the dark.
Attracting the wolves all around.
Only to howl for it is a majestic beauty.
I think I might just lose my mind.
Because your lips put me on the ground.
So soft yet so harmful.
As they take control of my life.
You’re nose is like the soft rolling mountains.
Pulling everyone in to see their beauty.
As it sets off the beauty of your face.
Without it you would not be the same.
You’re beauty lies not only in your face,
But within your inner love and outer appearance.
You my dear are a reflection of true beauty.
Author notes
i like it what do u think?
A contest entry
- beautiful... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended December 31, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
im not to great but what do u think?
Comments
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i love this one! vivid and true to the heart. yet again, well done
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Ah..very detailed scenario showes the depth and the the keenness of the subject ..and this makes this work a beautiful and warm work..well thoughtful poetry you did..thanks..
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haha. they have no idea...
haha im just kidding,
we all know ur not talking about me.
ha i love you =]
great job
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wow this is amazing i can almost see the girl...haha great write
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