a solitude of you
that being of you
touches me
in the quiet of night
with muted lips
and finger speech
that goes beyond what
my heart knows...
I exist as a soul
Author notes
sorry my muse has been quiet lately
Please tell me what you think...
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This is lovely
A most enjoyable read here my frind
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i thought you did a wonderful job. this poem reminds me a lot about myself because i am deaf - i don't use my vocal cords, i fingerspell and sign all my life. thanks for sharing your muse. =)
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Your muse seems find to me, the words you weave paint a portrait of the soul for all to view with beautiful hues. I like this.. those last lines.. beyond what my heart knows... I exist as a soul. Beautifully, and powerfully described! Much love my friend. -sighs-
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Your words drift in like sweet-perfumed smoke, intoxicating...
Ever write, Poetess.
SensualD.
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SensualD, Thank you so much...
Anna Lee
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Short and beautiful! Your muse is just perfect! This was amazing. You have such great talent.
Much love
Ylova
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This is quite beautiful. I love the shortness of the lines, and the abrut end. I like that there isnt a full stop at the end, i dont know if this was intentional or not or if you just missed it, but it makes it read much better. I love the last line, generally this has been written wonderfully, and im glad i chanced upon reading it,
Great work
Laura.
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Not that quiet, she still whispers in your dreams and you respond with verses like that one above.
So soft...
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My, oh my Anna this is beautiful. I personally don't think you need the last line but whatever, this is lovely. Thanks for sharing
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The good news is, once you are taught it, you remember it...and hopefully get spoiled by it. I'm glad the four humours are flowing positively now.
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Thank you Sir Yem, getting spoiled by it is the hardest part, hopefully I wouldn't be...
sorry I am not making any sense lately lol
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You say you aren't making sense lately...I haven't made sense in 50 years.
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I love the ending, and no your muse has certainly not muted in anyway, because you have penned brilliance.
Love
ALyzeh
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Thank you
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Wow- this is really beautiful- gets to the heart of what it is to desire another.
in the quiet of night
with muted lips
and finger speech
Is the bit I like the most.
Great work!
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Beautiful beautiful, elegant and serene! Love this piece.
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Geo, thank you
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A lovely short verse you've penned here Anna,
i can feel this longing through your words.
Well done
All the best to you
Ken
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yes....wonderful, Anna
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Thank you for always being here to help me
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it's my pleasure!
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this is very beautiful quiet & delicate...you have captured the touch here in this mood/essence of the poem....
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and what a beautiful soul...
this is a different kind of piece from you. Nice work.
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and you are too...
Jason,
Thank you, so glad to have you as a friend
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this is..
A very soft and sweet piece of writing about someone who i'm sure would smile widely at your tender words.. good job lady
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Rich,
Thank you...and for always making me smile too
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that was very good a great poem i like it
i like the line with muted lips it was powerful
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Thank you
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