The emptiness is taking me over...
Feeling is back....
Can't keep it down any longer...
It rises to the surface...
perfection is seeking to kill me this time...
it digs into every ounce of me that's not perfect...
Burises and blood cover my body...
staring into the mirror....
these eyes show me the ugliness i bare.....
The idea of letting go of everything.....
is so amazing...
eat barely anything......
puking up everything......
slowly at first.....
Then faster and faster....
The perfect resolts show...
A smile breaks the surface....
Soon enough to show....
how i'm killing myself..
A contest entry
- Anything & Everything!!! by Sheilasbabygal4life.
700 points, ended November 10, 160 entries
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This was a very well written piece. It was good and very enjoyable too read. Powerful and very strong in some parts. Thanks for entering and best of luck too you in the contest.
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this right was strong and i love the fact you wre able top pour yourself into this write and share with others i understand where you are comeing from just remember one day even if it takes moe time then others yuou will be back in the drivers seat and you will have more power and those horrable thoughts will dye down till then head up and im here if you ever need to chat or anything much love and keep it up gurl..xoxox
vanna
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as long as your happy..
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that is fucked up of you to say im sorry i dont know you and you dont know me but this poem has meaning if you didnt know and the meaning behind it is strong and thats fucked up to say " if it makes you happy" just wanted to tell you that!!
-vanna
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