Wicked White

The blindness, like bitter bees

stinging endless mounds of flesh

empowered me.

The lethal dosage of Morphine

that spurred on comas & crypts,

to come out of hiding to hiss.

The clash of cutlery in hollow buildings

as the ceiling falls in torrents, like tornados

the arenas arched collapses like corpses.

... but the weddings still on.

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Disturbed Prodigy
December 18, 2008

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wow, this was something of a read and once again in this night i am just like wow, keep it flowing and congrads on the contest
rinzurajan
December 18, 2008

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A SENSE OF PITCH BLACK SORROW WHERE THERE IS NO HOPE OF LIGHT IS POTRAYED WONDERFULLY THROUGH YOUR WORDS...

I HOPE YOU SEE THE POSITIVE SIDE OF LIFE SOON...

GOD BLESS
Noir mariposa...x
December 17, 2008
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I loved the end line, it just completed it in my view
Also loved the dark take ^^

"The lethal dosage of Morphine
that spurred on comas & crypts,
to come out of hiding to hiss. "
My favourite lines ^^

Thanks for entering!
Wish you the best of luck!
Claire x
In Too Deep1
December 17, 2008
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Beautifully dark story. A most enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp
Sandra R Reynolds
December 17, 2008
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Wow very scary. Good write