And now at last it comes to this
One hundred years are brought to naught
It only was a little kiss
His blasted gun has dropped me short
A pretty girl of twenty three
And worst of all is she kissed me!
A contest entry
- FAMOUS LAST WORDS AMONG A MIX OF OTHER OPTIONS by badnovocaine.
900 points, ended December 22, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Sounds like a problem
I loved this, some interesting choice of last words I might say.
Thank you for entering this amazing entry.
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His blasted gun has dropped me short
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Spot on.
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Brill with a great twist at the end-
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