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france.






i will be
anyone’s
wax figure,
hand-crafted
and pleasant.

won’t mind
licking
silver coins
off the floor
till the seine
of my tongue
runs dry.

i promise we will
champs-elysees
together

in royal style.







Author notes

Dec. 17, 2008

At least I'll do my part, I promise.
'Cause I you insanely muchy.

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Honesty.

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    December 18, 2008

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    I can't believe that I missed this poem! This is beautiful, even more so because I know what this is about (maybe except one part ) ... I really love the way that you write - it makes me drift into your words (and also be a little ashamed of my writing!) you are a darling, and I hope that france is a reality



    Polly

    • piggyback
      December 19, 2008
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      What don't you know? You know everything.

      Hmm. YOUR poetry humbles ME.

      Thank you

  • Judith Chandler
    December 18, 2008

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    I don't know what to say but let's stick to the poem, which is interesting and original.

    Thank you for entering my contest.