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Tattoo

(without music)

CHORUS

Just like a tattoo,
I can't get rid of you,
You're all up on me,
Why? I don't see.
And I ask you why,
But you lie.
Oh why'd you lie?

(music)

VERSE 1

It all started just ten days ago,
I saw that look in your eyes,
What are you thinking? I wanna know,
If it's love, then it's no surprise.
I've seen the way you look at me,
There's something in your glare,
What else could it be?
Other than a feeling right there.

BRIDGE

And oh,
Is there a hidden agenda?
Something you're not telling me.
Oh,
Thought I'd better remind ya,
The effect you have on me, oh.

CHORUS

Just like a tattoo,
I can't get rid of you,
You're all up on me,
Why? I don't see.
And I ask you why,
But you lie.
Oh why'd you lie?

You just say you're trying to impress your friends,
To prove them all wrong,
Cos they said, that you, wouldn't stand a chance,
With a guy like me.
But I think, I feel, I see what's behind your eyes,
There's a deep down love or lust,
Longing to be free.
But I can't get rid of you,
Just like a tattoo,
Just like a tattoo.

VERSE 2

I could feel something strong,
When you looked me up and down,
There's no way I can be wrong,
I've got my head facedown.
"It's crazy!" I think to myself,
This isn't what it seems,
But your gentle ways, your loving eyes,
Release my silent screams.

BRIDGE

And oh,
Is there a hidden agenda?
Something you're not telling me.
Oh,
Thought I'd better remind ya,
The effect you have on me, oh.

CHROUS

Just like a tattoo,
I can't get rid of you,
You're all up on me,
Why? I don't see.
And I ask you why,
But you lie.
Oh why'd you lie?

You just say you're trying to impress you friends,
To prove them all wrong,
Cos they said, that you, wouldn't stand a chance,
With a guy like me.
But I think, I feel, I see what's behind your eyes,
There's a deep down love or lust,
Longing to be free.
But I can't get rid of you,
Just like a tattoo,
Just like a tattoo.

M8

Oh it's true,
I love you too,
I can't deny that fact.
And oh,
I know you do,
We gotta interact.
(REPEAT)
Let's go...

(Hold "go" over chorus)

CHORUS

I'll always have you,
Just like a tattoo.

Author notes

04:51

This is a take-off of Jordin Sparks' Tattoo, but only slightly, because I had this in my head, and then I listened to hers, and it doesn't really sound like it, but it's kinda based on that.

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Comments

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  • PureCountry
    January 5
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    Tattoo,

    your title drew me in, I must admit. Having found the lyrics, here. I will admit the flow works, though a little weaker in places. I too find the resident theme strong throughout the whole offering. I commend you for your efforts.

    Best of Luck to you in your future writing.

    Respectfully,
    Silent Hawk


    • Autumn Whisper
      May 21
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      Thanks Silent Hawk I enjoy writing songs based on real-life ones.

      best wishes as always
      Autumn Whisper


    • Autumn Whisper
      January 11
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      I agree with your flow comment as well, but I wanted to get the words in, Thanks for your comment.


  • Draig aine gold member
    January 5
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    very good write

    the theme is strong, the lyrics seem to work well, can you hum a few bars,


  • xXCadyBabbiXx
    December 17, 2008
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    Jordan Sparks...?
    This is not original.

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