Broken Memories

Decapitated memories
Bonded by flesh

Broken by insanity

Thrown against the wall

Tears, a condescend waterfall

The burning flame ahead of me

Time stand-stilling

Shadows fill the cave that is me

Enraged pitfalls of doubt

My tool of death

Soulless eyes surround me

The darkness envelopes me

My sweet crimson savior

Rushing away from me

My pool of regrets confine me

Sweet goodbyes

My eyesight fading

The haunting memories of us

Gone with me

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Night Terrors
May 11
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that was strong and poerful intense images lots of emotion I really loved reading this
Devilish Temptation
March 14

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Very strong and intense filled piece. enriched with emotion that pull at the readers heart strings. I enjoyed you poem it made me feel I wasn't that lonely. Take care
RedAquarius
January 25

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I like dark poems - original, creative dark works. This, while solid, doesn't jump out at me - except for the word crimson which is overused in dark poetry. Overall I liked it ok.
ASmileForYou
December 18, 2008
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I liked reading this poem but i'm kind of OCD so I really got caught on "time stand-stilling." I'm not sure if you meant to put it like that, word order can have many different effects, but I think you might be going after "time standing still"??
It's all right if not though, it is just my opinion. The rest of this was great. Thanks for entering!
SilentTearsOnceMore
December 17, 2008
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Great poem, i enjoyed reading it
Well written