Masquerade of emotions;
unleashed.
A Cheshire phoenix
ignites tangerine souls
on passion's wings
Author notes
Prompt: Fire
13 words
Photo Credits: http://kaneda99.deviantart.com/art/kiss-15332431
In a list
A contest entry
- 13, unlucky for some? by xDemonicxAngelx.
550 points, ended December 18, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Why this didn't get a shiny i have no clue,
it sure as hell deserved one that's for sure.
"A Cheshire phoenix
ignites tangerine souls
on passion's wings"
So well done Alyzeh
All the best to you
Ken
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This is amazing imagery and full of detail... This was a beautiful write.
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Interesting weave of vibrant emotion, and color. "Cheshire pheonix" is a fascinating image. Can't help but get a retro-early 70's ara feel to this. Kind of psychodelic with the pic. Terrific. Geo
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Another wonderful poem in so few lines.
You're so good at these short writes
So much colour and emotion in your painted words
Well done.
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i dig your style. on all of your work. you have a way with words. short and sweet. touching and prompting.
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Wow, very well penned! Beautiful imagery portrayed here. Fab for 13 words, says so much. Love the pic to, superb write
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nicely penned . . good luck in the contest !!
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Mesmersing words which hardly canopy any metaphor, this is as exactly how it should be, it couldn't have been written any better. I like Cheshire mentioned, i wondered if I could use the image sometime? Thanks. Tony
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Thank you Tony. Yes, ofcourse go ahead and use the image, I got it off deviant art. Just credit the artist.
Thanks for dropping by, come again.
Love
Alyzeh
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You have penned a wonderful poem in a few lines of fantasitic imagery. Great take on the prompt! You take care, Sandy
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Wonderful! I love your words and the deep feeling you gave through this poem. Short and effective.
I enjoyed it very much, and loved the picture.
Love&Peace
~Noor
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Short but still on of the best kind of poems i have seen i a while, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest.
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Oh,This is good. Wonderful word choice. I like how you used the word "cheshire." That word always makes me think of Alice's Adventures in Wonderland. Best of luck!
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Great job on the prompt, this was beautifully written and I really enjoyed it. Thank you for entering and good luck!
Take care
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Thank you
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Brilliant!!!
Wishing all the very best to you!!! Peace always, xx Cyn 
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Beautiful. The descriptions in this are intriguing, especially about the Cheshire phoenix. Thanks for sharing!
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I thought you did a good job w/this poem - because the releasing of emotions is a lot like fire. I like the concept of masquerade & the shortness of the poem.
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