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Ununderstandable

How can they understand,
I cant even comprehend,

 

What God has for us

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dont worry it will be deleted

Give me tips on better was to make this poem flow

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  • Walking Oxymoron gold member
    December 17, 2008

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    Why would you delete it??????

    In answer to your question, I don't think anyone does. Understand, that is.
    No-one knows, no-one should! Or we'd fight against it.

    Maybe people spend too much time thinking about living, instead of actually living.

    Great thought there, well done!