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Waiting

Hiding in shadows just passing the time
Watching the crowd for the target assigned
Weapons concealed so I don’t arouse suspicion
Now i'm just waiting for the perfect conditions

My employer was as cautious and cunning as a bat
He never saw me in person he sent his people for that
So his identity remains hidden from this fatal affair
But as long as i'm paid I don’t really care

I’ve got experience that is for sure
The heartache from killing would be tough for anyone but me to endure
That is why I was hired, they want no trail
This kill must be perfect without fail

I ready my gun this shot will fly true
Hit him in the gut and make him turn blue
This bullet is coated in slow acting venom
I’ll make my escape, while guards futilely try and save him

But something’s not right it is all wrong
The target is missing!! He is gone!!
Did they know I was coming? Could this really be happening?
I must make my escape, while security is gathering.

I was so careful. It was foolproof I'm sure
The toxin on the bullet has no cure
Someone found out. And then they squeaked
I’ve got to kill myself or they will torture me until the end of next week

So with nervous hands that deadly assassin swallowed a pill
Then there was a shake and a shudder and then all was still
But if he had waited like he was trained to do
He will find that George Bush just went to a drive thru

I hope you learned something by reading this poem
Unless you skipped to the ending like my brother would at home
Don’t always act rashly, wait for a while
Because if you are patient you will be rewarded for your guile

Author notes

i wanted to know what an assassin was thinking right before he killed somebody, so i put my thoughts down on paper and this is what i got

(dear synthetic nightmare.......... i told you about this poem this is the one that is not really in the contest. sorry if i caused problems by entering it. i just figured since it is about an assasin you might like to read it. when you finish reading it go ahead and delete it unless you feel it is contest worthy. you don't even have to comment on it.)
(in case you do think it is worthy of an entry.)
"She ricochets and you don't notice"

A contest entry

what kind of thoughts does this poem bring up to the surface of your mind? anything at all? i dont care how stupid or random it is. feel free to comment

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  • Synthetic-Nightmare
    December 31, 2008

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    Hey hun......

    sorry it has taken so long to get back to you. I'm not going to delete because an assassin is still a killer. ha, you used qualities in this like stalking and intelligence and this piece is well thought out. You did an amazing job portraying the mind of a hired killer and i really do like this

    Thanks for being respectful!! You are quite talented