candlesticks;
molten wax smolders,
burning my fingertips
worse than your eyes
ever did.
Author notes
13 words.
prompt: fire.
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i actually typed 13 words all in one go, no edits, im proud of myself 
In a list
A contest entry
- 13, unlucky for some? by xDemonicxAngelx.
550 points, ended December 18, 2008, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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beautiful.
i love the background and the format and everything and all the words related to fire.
and i love how the title could relate to ice as well
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i really like this
really
realy
like this..
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Love that ending! Fantastic take on the prompt, I really really loved it. Thank you for entering and good luck!
Take care
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"candlesticks;
molten wax smolders,"
Pretty.
I agree with the person below me.
I know how eyes can burn, it's irritating
Unlike this.
Pure.Deadliness.
Shelly
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thanks love <3333
you know what, you & your writing is deadly
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Nah, nah we're not
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"worse than your eyes ever did".... Wow. That is deep. I can totally relate to that bit.
Interesting imagery and story woven through it.
Goodness, why are you so awesome? haha.
Good luck in the contest you entered!
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thanksss for all the comments.. im just too lazy to reply on every poem lol
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