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Tango

 

 

 

Torrents of passion
ablaze in our eyes,
as forbidden movements
incite flickering flames.

Author notes

Prompt: Fire
13 Words
Picture Credit: http://brokenstudios.deviantart.com/art/tango-44955855

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  • Meroza
    December 31, 2008

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    Wow, this one was hot, seriously! And that shiny gold sure fits nicely on your profile

    Congrats


  • thepoetssoul
    December 28, 2008

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    This is a fantastic take on the pic.
    Your word choice is exellent.
    Well done sweet soul
    Congradulations on the Gold

    Tony


  • poeticweaver gold member
    December 19, 2008

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    Congrates On The Gold!

    Wonderfully worded, and your words at that extra spice to the prompt! Thanks for sharing here, and keep on penning on, which I'm quite sure with a muse like yours, you'll be doing! Bravo sweet soul!

    Peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver~


  • Scyphon
    December 18, 2008
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    Woot, congrats on your well deserved Gold Ylova


  • xDemonicxAngelx
    December 18, 2008

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    Gorgeous! Loved everything about it. Fantastic job. Thank you for entering and good luck!

    Take care


  • Alyzeh
    December 18, 2008

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    Ohh! This is beautiful! Perfect

    All the best to you!
    Love
    Alyzeh


  • Hikari Lady
    December 18, 2008

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    Wonderful! There's even some hint of rythme in here. the picture is amazing as well. Well chosen words.

    Love&Peace
    ~Noor


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 18, 2008

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    No i love this and that is all i have to say this was something golden, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • Jesann gold member
    December 18, 2008

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    Fantastic imagery created from so few words.
    Hot, hot, hot !!!!!
    Great take on the prompt, well done.


  • Joseph Hollis
    December 17, 2008

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    What a fiery dance this is! A sizzling take on the prompt. Hot, I tell you! Well done and best of luck.


  • Hikari Lady
    December 17, 2008
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    too many reservies lately, lady. poke when done, okay?

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