Torrents of passion
ablaze in our eyes,
as forbidden movements
incite flickering flames.
Author notes
Prompt: Fire
13 Words
Picture Credit: http://brokenstudios.deviantart.com/art/tango-44955855
In a list
A contest entry
- 13, unlucky for some? by xDemonicxAngelx.
550 points, ended December 18, 2008, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think?
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Wow, this one was hot, seriously! And that shiny gold sure fits nicely on your profile
Congrats
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This is a fantastic take on the pic.
Your word choice is exellent.
Well done sweet soul
Congradulations on the Gold
Tony
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Congrates On The Gold!
Wonderfully worded, and your words at that extra spice to the prompt!
Thanks for sharing here, and keep on penning on, which I'm quite sure with a muse like yours, you'll be doing! 
Bravo sweet soul! 
Peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver~
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Woot, congrats on your well deserved Gold Ylova
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Gorgeous!
Loved everything about it. Fantastic job. Thank you for entering and good luck!
Take care
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Ohh! This is beautiful! Perfect
All the best to you!
Love
Alyzeh
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Wonderful! There's even some hint of rythme in here. the picture is amazing as well. Well chosen words.
Love&Peace
~Noor
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No i love this and that is all i have to say this was something golden, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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Fantastic imagery created from so few words.
Hot, hot, hot !!!!!
Great take on the prompt, well done.
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What a fiery dance this is! A sizzling take on the prompt. Hot, I tell you! Well done and best of luck.
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too many reservies lately, lady. poke when done, okay?
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