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Winter's Warm Embrace

 

 

Glowing embers,

in this cold chamber
fuel passionate desires,
creating blazing warmth within.

Author notes

Prompt: Fire
13 Words
Picture Credit: http://phoenixkeyblack.deviantart.com/art/Burning-Embers-62966643

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  • Bruce silver member
    December 24, 2008

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    This is a good one! Glowing embers in ths cold chamber. How subtly you use the prompt for your own ends. Good job!


  • chilali
    December 19, 2008

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    I loved your take on the prompt! Very sensual indeed. Congratulations on the Bronze

    Much love,
    Ylova


  • xDemonicxAngelx
    December 18, 2008

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    Lovely take on the prompt, I enjoyed reading it and you said so much within the 13 words. Great job. Thank you for entering and good luck!

    Take care


  • Alyzeh
    December 18, 2008

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    Oh! This was very sensual, in just 13 words! Nicely done!
    All the best to you

    Love
    Alyzeh