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christmas . . .
santa dodges
yellow snow!
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  • Peteskid gold member
    July 11
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    look out for the yellow snow...and reindeer hmmm...PK


  • haikumonk gold member
    December 23, 2008
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    LOL... thanks!

  • carole21
    December 23, 2008
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    ha ha . . congrats on the gold !!


  • Yemassee gold member
    December 18, 2008
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    Watch out where the huskies go, and dont you eat that yellow snow. Frank Zappa is a god to all us left-of-center folk.

    The great question out there is (and requiring another haiku maybe to answer it)

    "Who threw the laced snow ball?"

    My money is on Rudolph...with that red nose...he looks suspicious...


    • haikumonk gold member
      December 18, 2008
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      LOLLLLL funny stuff! Another haiku might have to be in the mail... here.


  • Joseph Hollis
    December 18, 2008

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    Haha, well done! This is a very enjoyable read. Everyone should have a healthy fear of yellow snow. Best of luck in the contest.


    • haikumonk gold member
      December 18, 2008
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      Yep... I agree fully.... hahaaa hohohooo! And thanks!


  • Mari Goes gold member
    December 17, 2008

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    Small bladder! Oh, that is an imagery funny and nasty lol
    On a freezing day Santa would be creating some stalactites
    Funny haiku and excellent done.
    Thanks and I wish you a white, all white!!! Christmas!


  • just mercedes gold member
    December 17, 2008
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    LOL! Good one, sensei.


  • Sai Babas Lotus
    December 17, 2008

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    Ha ha! The imagery is so funny in this one. Loved it! We had our Christmas Party in school today. It was simply great!! Everyone had a blast. We did have a dodging game too with the 13 kids that had turned up. It was really fun! I have taken over 36 photos!! Plan to write haiku on them once school closes for the Winter holidays this Friday! MERRY CHRISTMAS TO U AND HAPPY HOLIDAYS!

    Char

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