Festive fire crackles
spiced apple scent thrills, soot falls
Santa's bottom burnt
A contest entry
- Christmas haiku by Mari Goes.
900 points, ended December 19, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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LOL What a delightful Christmas poem!!! The ending line is just perfect. Thank you for sharing with us.
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Wonderful, and very very Christmassy. Hahahaha. Well done Sugar. Good luck in the competition. xxx
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Thank you baby, trying to put the fire out on Santa..I wonder if that is where hot pants came from LMAO! Hehehehe
Love you
Chelle xxx
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LOL ouch indeed!!! Good thing Santa has a big bottom
Poor Santa, when doesn't get his butt burnt on chimneys, he gets by fire crackles, hard to be the one to deliver the gifts, he needs a good fire insurance
Funny haiku, I like humour and yours was very good here.
Thanks and have a very pleasant (fire free) Christmas
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He does indeed, wouldn't want to pay the premiums
Glad you got a laugh from this, appreciate and value your comment
~sugar~
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BEST OF LUCK IN THE CONTEST WITH THIS HUMOROUS HAIKU.
THANK GOD the christmas tree didn't catch on fire, too.
That's what he gets for jumping down a smoking chimney in Miss Honey's house! HE! HE! Even the mouse was smart enough to stay away from a burning fire - as well as all her pets! HE! HE!
MERRY CHRISTMAS, BABY!
Knowing Miss Honey she kissed old St Nicks bottom better after giving him a good, hard spanking and yanking first!
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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You know Miss Honey sweetie
Thank you hon for your fab comment
They always leave me with a smile. Merry Christmas sweetie.
Love you ~sugar~
xx
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*chuckle*
Very funny, sis, especially the part about Santa's butt burning.
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Glad you enjoyed bro
A pleasure to have you read
Love & your sis
~sugar~
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A humorous little ditty
that makes me want to go Ho! Ho! Ho! Thanks onesugar for the holiday spirit.
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Thank you hon for the advice..I really must learn how to count
I enjoy dabbling, A pleasure to have you read.
Merry Christmas hon
Love ~sweetness~ xxx
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This made me think of a lovely warm fire, nicely crackling, everyone asleep, the scent of mulled wine, and Santa climbing down the chimney, poor Santa, your ending made me laugh. You have painted quite a good story, in very few words, well done
All the best
Emma
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Just having a little fun..you should give these a go.
One tip, make sure you can count LOL!
Appreciate and value you reading.
~sugar~
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