Lets submerge into each other.
Let me explore the anatomy of your soul.
Let me plunge head-first into the murky depths of your mind,
or find my way through the forests of your heart.
Worry not, Dearest Mine.
For this brave explorer will stay true to the path,
in disregard to any findings.
Never falter, and never turn, I'll be ever faithful,
true to the end.
Fancies won't disturb my devotion, distractions will only crumble away.
Everything else pales in the light of your elegance,
The Glimmer of your Pulchritude.
Honey, you're the summer dew, the feel of fresh cut grass.
Your touch on my skin turns even the Angels sick with envy,
your kisses are like water to the sunflowers in my soul.
Let me devour you,
let me become you.
I want to live in your skin, I want to see through your mind.
Let us become one,
let's submerge into each other.
If you don't like this.... Good For You!
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i like this (even though love poems usually make me sick). i particularly like the line "Let me plunge head-first into the murky depths of your mind". however, im quite sceptical of the title...it doesnt quite fit the rest of the poem, and certainly not with the first and last line. (taking tips off the comment suggestions!
) also, your vocabulary is markedly larger than mine. I had to pull my dictionary out for this one. Pulchritude is an interesting word, indeed. anyway. well done indeed.
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Well thank you.
And, pulchritude is onea my favorite words. :]
Ah ha, madame. You found me out! True, true; the title doesn't fit.
But, my titles are always just the first thing that pops into my head, and, that's what I first got.
So it stuck.
Thanks for the read.
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