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Pretentious.

Love, we all do it from time to time.
Don't think you're special, people made fools of themselves
long before you and I.
Stop being so damn pretentious.
We all ride the carousal at the same pace,
your camel won't outflank my stallion.
Don't let your infatuation impregnate you with faulty ideas.
You aren't any better than anyone else.
You haven't found something special, or rare.
you're just another poor sucker whose heart killed their head

If you don't like this.... Good For You!

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  • scribbleheart
    July 22

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    amazing!!!

    "You're just another poor sucker whose heart killed their head"

    love it.

    and once again! your vocabulary! but this time i know the words. very nice.

    x
    Alyssa


  • evil-incarnate
    July 19

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    this is brilliant! i love the last line, and the carousal....im not quite sure why i like it so much, but i do