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The Plead For Forgiveness

Sorry i speeding sir
I had to get to work
Just climb in here beside me
You dont have to be a jerk

Im sorry sir i promise
Climb in in and we can have fun
If you have no need to fine me
Ill have no need to run

Just let me go this one time
I promsie i wont tell
You can have your way with me
And i wont even yell
The End





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  • Bob Fox
    January 9

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    Well

    Lol I must say something very different indeed. I am sure some cops will say.. Oh boy. But I did love the rhyme & ty for the read on my poem.


  • The Hardest Goodbye
    December 17, 2008
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    wtf jeremy ... thats oddly funny xD


  • thejollytinker
    December 17, 2008
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    Just this one time; greatest parting words even spoken to a constable- funny stuff Jeremy!


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    December 17, 2008

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    LOL! Yeah that'll do it every time!
    Thanks for your entry and all the best to
    you in my contest. I appreciate it!




    Jeremy0826