Plastic;
how I feel when subjected to drama.
I stand;
plastic,
inanimate,
noncomprehending,
uncaring.
Plastic;
My shield - hiding who's really me.
Author notes
[x] True
Ehm... 21 words
As you know, short and concise ain't my thing, but I tried.
A contest entry
- 'a bored at work' QUICKIE #5 by yellow blue bus.
400 points, ended December 17, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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when it comes right down to it we really need to experience time alone in the wilderness to find the deeper us this was great ..plastic people yep so true
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ahh, i love this. pure brilliance, i'd say (: i love how you portrayed the whole plastic thing. very original and well written, doll.
-Plastic;
My shield - hiding who's really me.
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loveee that. verrrry captivating. (:
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Thank you so much
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Aww this one is short yet so full of beauty & depth!
I have missed your poetry as well hun!!
This was wonderful.. should have won gold in my eyes -
i love that word
was going to use it one of my upcoming poems
good job love
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great take on the prompt. i like this, it seems so real. the ending is incredibly strong.
thanks for entering and goodluck
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i like this
the shortness and simplicity really helps make your message
this is really good -
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Awh thanks hun, I wanted to rate this but it won't let me
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