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Scream

I screamed at you
In my dream last night

You didn’t hear me
You never hear me

You sat looking past me
And I screamed softly

I woke crying sweat
Dripping down my back

Frustrated and alone;
You’ll never hear me.

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  • tellnotalesxx
    December 17, 2008
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    Wow!! I love the intensity and anger in this poem! It's like your soo mad because you want this person to hear you and no matter how much youu scream and make your voice heard they don't hear you.
    I know exactly how you feel and that anger!!
    good jobb greatt writee and emotions ^^)
    -melijeli