Emerald envy mixes with pride
and golden hopes dance with desire,
as crimson fury smoulders within
and fans wrathful flames higher.
Blackened fears of onyx stone
jostle with sky-blues dreams,
whilst rose and coral coloured love
drown out insecurities screams.
Many shades within
that make a whole,
a rainbow of feelings,
a multi-coloured soul.
Author notes
Picture credit : http://husam-elfaki.deviantart.com/art/Revolution-91757837
A contest entry
- Personalized Picture Prompts (YAY for alliteration!) by liduen.
550 points, ended January 6, 2009, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Nicely done. I like this colorful poem. I read your page and see that you have returned after almost a year. Welcome back. I only started writing a year ago.
Mike -
Such a wonderful use of some of the more exotic hues of the spectrum certainly deserves congratulations, and to have tapped all this from the image is a great accomplishment. Also the great combinations of the flavors of emotions, blend so well that it offers a wonderful conclusion in imagery and essence to a great poem.
Thanks for sharing...
Peace,
hypnorocker
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I love this - especially the last stanza.
A multi-colored soul
Beautiful.
Good luck in my contest! -
Thanks for entering! Here's your prompt: http://husam-elfaki.deviantart.com/art/Revolution-91757837
If you really don't like it you can message me.
Good luck!
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