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Cold Shadows

Hiding lost in dark cold shadows
  Places where the sun never shines

Hallways bleak and misty gray
In the rooms of lost sad times

Looking for the memories now lost
Of times when life held the sun

Now just shadows still closing in
Wondering when peace will come




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  • Sandygram silver member
    December 17, 2008

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    Do not hide in shadows gray
    Let the sun chase them away
    Hold memories in your heart
    But also let a new day start
    In time my friend you will find
    New love and leave your pain behind.

    Well John, this one touches the reader's heart. It is so hard to forget some loves. They stay in our hearts forever. You poems always touch me emotionally. Beautiful and heartfelt words.

    Loving Blessing my friend. Sandy


  • Melodies
    December 17, 2008
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    Sending you a hug today
    and merry kisses on their way
    to cheer your soul and give a smile...
    they tumble to you, mile on mile!

    You have written a poem that melts the reader's poor heart, good Sir. Behind every shadow is someone who loves you.