I see you sitting in the dark,
i look upon your wrist,
you have a mark.
I look upon your face,
theres tears streaked,
across you cheek,
you look at yourself as a disgrace.
Let me hold you,
i'll keep you safe,
away from harm,
away from hate.
Please don't hide,
please don't cry,
let me hold you,
never say goodbye.
A contest entry
- prewrites round contest #1 by serenity silvermoon.
425 points, ended December 27, 2008, 86 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow sissy i wish i would have commented on this poem when it was in my contest it would have won something this poem is so beautiful i dont need the help anymore but you do so get it thank you for sharing keep up the great work
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Yupz, never say good bye, say we will meet again
by
the poet of hearts and beautiful words
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this poem cuts deep.
it is very heart-felt and sincere.
i only wish that someone would say those words to me.
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awww this is soo cutee andd touching. it seems like this personn just wants to keep you safee andd its just soo amazinggg! ii lovee the poemm its real cute and full of care, great job ^^)
-melijeli
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Very soft and touching words...heart felt and full of love and comfort...could be a beautiful song.
Nicely done!
mystic
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I like this, it is not only personally touching to me, (I have been through this) but it feels very consoling.
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So sweet and loving here, just so touching, simple and from as always It's a lullaby itself for the one in pain...
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