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Struck by lightning.

Struck by lightning,
in the face,
this poor girl,
is in a happier place.

She was riding her bike,
but the lord decided,
her time was up,
so take a hike.

She dropped to the floor,
her body burnt and tore,
this poor girl,
has entered the white door.

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  • serenity silvermoon
    October 23

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    how sad what suck imergey you have used here what a sad poem i hope this really didnt happen to anyone you know this poem was sad but great thank you for sharing keep up the great work


  • The.poet.of.hearts
    February 25

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    Ohh, so painful


    by
    the poet of hearts and beautiful words


  • mysticstorm gold member
    December 17, 2008

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    Ocuh! This is dark, yet ends in hope...nice flow and meter...very creative and visual...

    mystic


  • She burns
    December 17, 2008

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    So sad and scary here, to be struck by lightning, it's like one in a million, the odds of getting hit by it...