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Life of a Madman

You live a lie.
I can see through it.
And in truth you belong,
in a madhouse.

You want to get rid of anger?
Can you expect that to happen?
No...you can try...
I can attest to that.

You live the life of
a madman
drowning in misery
rid yourself of anger and
all vanities.

Forgotten soul
wants recognition
I can't help but sigh
you can never know the way
of getting around
the truth
within your
bloodstained lies.

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..yuck

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  • momwitzman
    January 10, 2009
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    I like it. Reminds me of someone.