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Corrupt

Eyes of red,
heart of stone
corruption is
where he belongs.
The forgotten era
of past misdeeds,
the poision of
his lies.
Dare not fall
into his arms,
his name
--Corruption--
dare not walk
along his line
for he knows the truth
and in the end
his tendrils will
come to suffocate you.
Corruption
cannot be denied,
once you give yourself unto him.
Don't be fooled
by his smile,
he will lead you unto sin.
Corruption
the evils of the world,
can you see through his mask?
May you wake and find
him gone
at last

Author notes

I know the flow is sketchy...and I didn't mean to rhyme...it just happened.

What do you think? Anything I can work on?

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  • momwitzman
    January 10, 2009
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    I like this one as well.