If i were to die in a dark abyss, would you come find me
If i were to love you to no end, would you love me back
If i were to scream your name, would you listen
If i werer to hold you close. would you push me away
If you needed help, would i be the first one you called
If i gave you the key to my heart, would you keep it close
If said your name with my last breath, would you ever let go
If i held you in my arms, would you hold me back
If i kissed your soft lipes, would you kiss me back
If i looked at you with my blue eues, would you turn away
If my heart shadderd, would you be there to pick up the peices
If i said that i'd wait for you, would you come after me
If i were to wither away from the world, would you notice
If i forgot the song to my heart, would you sing it to me
If i was a hollow shell, would you still love me
If i filled the hole i fell in, would you dig me out
If you can answer any of these, then please tell me why....
Author notes
this is a poem i wrote long ago....i hope it is still has the same impact..
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You have a very beautiful mind.
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i really like this one teddy. it was really good; the emotions were really powerful and jumped out at me as i read this. it brought tears to my eyes. i'll always be here for you teddy if you need someone to talk to. that's a promise.
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i like it. it reminds me of me nd past relationships.
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omg this is such a good read i really like it
good job -
wow thats tru
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This is beautiful. it made me cry. you have used so much emotion in this poem.
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awsome
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duhh!!! YESSSSSSSSSSSS to everything!!! you're amazing friend The Jordan!!!! I luffles youuuus!!!
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god i see we have the i love you fans still going then
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yes yes yes...a zillion times
yes to all the things
you said because you're
one of my bestest friend in
the whole wide world and
ur so amazing and i dnt deserve
someone as sweet as you (as a friend)
and you are sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
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wow and i love you and you
have the most amazing
personality on the planet
and ur sweet, adorable and caring.
does that answer all ur questions?
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Yes. Why? Because I love you.
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i loved your poem as usual but you never read or commented my poem. your my squishy and i love you like my best friend.
for the answers just message me and i'll explain everything
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woooow loveed it great poem"""
check out my poems to please x -
yes, b/c i love you.
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