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Still need you

When we were little and so innocent our love was true
a hold of the hand was a rareity, you always wanted to be with me.
those late night phone calls and are wish at 12:12.

Two years later we began to grow old.
It all started in December, when the weather was cold.
You noticed the girls other than me.
And lost your sence and set me free.

Now to this day I look at you when you pass.
Knowing it will never be the same.
My heart ache never went away.
I forced my self to get through the days, the months, the years.

All of those tears I shed, I began to dread the best times of my life.
I moved on and so did you, but other loves were not so true.
And to this day it just doesn't feel right to be with another.
Settleing for less isn't the way to go.
Some day we both will know when its right to be together.
And ill wait here for you because are love was so true.

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  • Eusebius
    December 17, 2008

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    A lot of passion and thought went into this poem, a lover's lament for love lost! very deftly done poem and I loved it a ton!


  • Adrienne12
    December 17, 2008
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    I understand this is ammature but im looking to revise it so please leave some good tips : ]