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circles of confusion

The random state of the unknown
To figure out what was said and why
Is it pronounced scon or  is it a scown?
Maybe the answer is in the sky...

Is it a square or is it a circle?
Is it now or was it before?
All I see is flashes of purple
In confusing circles dancing on the floor

Is it a question or statement?
Will there be an answer?
I wish confusion was something to paint
Am I human or just a dancer?






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Option 6 - circles of confusion.

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  • Walking Oxymoron gold member
    December 28, 2008
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    It's the randomness that did it for me...
    It Rocks On.

    My fave lines?
    Is it a square or is it a circle?
    Is it now or was it before?

    I wish confusion was something to paint.

    Questions....Questions. So many!


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    December 18, 2008

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    Nice job. I liked this poem. In particular, liked the line - I wish confusion was something to paint.

    Mike

  • Walking Oxymoron gold member
    December 17, 2008

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    Wow! Just read this again- and It's really good! Loving like every other line!
    i reckon that i'm just a dancer, what about you?
    and do you really think confusion would be something you could paint? Yeah, i really liked this- now i can concentrate on it!