The random state of the unknown
To figure out what was said and why
Is it pronounced scon or is it a scown?
Maybe the answer is in the sky...
Is it a square or is it a circle?
Is it now or was it before?
All I see is flashes of purple
In confusing circles dancing on the floor
Is it a question or statement?
Will there be an answer?
I wish confusion was something to paint
Am I human or just a dancer?
Author notes
Option 6 - circles of confusion.
A contest entry
- Titles! by Walking Oxymoron.
700 points, ended December 28, 2008, 25 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Are you confused yet?
Comments
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It's the randomness that did it for me...
It Rocks On.
My fave lines?
Is it a square or is it a circle?
Is it now or was it before?
I wish confusion was something to paint.
Questions....Questions. So many! -
Nice job. I liked this poem. In particular, liked the line - I wish confusion was something to paint.
Mike
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Wow! Just read this again- and It's really good! Loving like every other line!
i reckon that i'm just a dancer, what about you?
and do you really think confusion would be something you could paint? Yeah, i really liked this- now i can concentrate on it!
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