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Through Little Robin's Eyes

This morning I woke up to my mama's
Beautiful smile & her soft voice
Saying, "Good morning!"
We love to play in the sun's first rays of day.

Now, as I see those beautiful, majestic animals
(are they horses?) running far away,
I see Father Sun winding all his
Children down, getting them ready for bed,

When the moon will tuck them in
And keep her silvery watch over them.
The sun's yellowy orange light is mixed
With all it touches in the final moments of the day.

The other kids toddle to their mamas
Just to hear their soft voices
Just to see their radiant smiles
And once again play in the morning's first rays.

I am the first to be back in Mama's arms.

Author notes

For Twilight Panther's Contest.

A contest entry

I tried to say what Dewey would say if he had the words.

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Comments

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  • UnManned4Ever
    April 7

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    This is so beautiful and well put. I liked it ALOT! Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece of art with us! SIS! :


    • SunDew
      April 7
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      It's about time you commented!

      I'm glad you liked it so much! Anytime, lol! I love you!


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    December 30, 2008

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    and as little Robin would say...this is a awesome piece you have written really enjoyed and brought a smile...thank you so much for entering..


    • SunDew
      December 30, 2008
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      Niaish from us both, Twilight.

      Have a wonderful & safe New Year!
      ~Bright


  • Shakes-spear
    December 29, 2008

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    So sweet

    This is such a wonderful thought. back in the arms of Mom. I love it, but I'm so fat she could not hold me. Great thought though! LOL I really did love this, The Shaker

    • SunDew
      December 29, 2008
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      Hee hee, I don't think she'd mind you trying all that much, anyway! Thanks again, dear uncle!

      We love you!
      ~Bright & Little Robin


  • LittleMoon silver member
    December 25, 2008
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    Sweet and gentle words from the knowing heart of a young mother. So softly done with love.


    • SunDew
      December 25, 2008
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      littlemoon

      Many thanks to you. Merry Christmas!

      ~Bright


  • Three Doves
    December 20, 2008

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    A well written poem!
    when reading the poem this line stood out the most and compelled me to reread this line over and over for the words just grabbed hold of my heart and refused to let go.
    "when the moon will tuck them in
    and keep her silvery watch over them.".
    Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
    Best wishes in life.
    Peace in light and love
    Noah

    • SunDew
      December 20, 2008
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      noah

      I thank you ever so kindly for those touching words. Glad to know my poem is rereadable! You know that's the ultimate goal of all my poetry - to grab you & never let go. Ok, I'm kidding! But really, thanks again for the comment.

      All the same to you,
      ~Bright

  • SoulWhispher
    December 17, 2008

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    Such beauty through the eyes of a child, and I am sure that is what dewey would say, great flow and rthym, you have weaved a most moving poem, blessings John


    • SunDew
      December 17, 2008
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      john

      Your words of kindness never cease to make me feel happy, even when I am sad. Thank you again.

      s,
      ~Bright

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