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Eclipse.

Darkness steals the sky,
Defeated light slips away
Unnoticed.
The earth is left alone,
kneeling below a blanket of despair.

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  • xDemonicxAngelx
    December 18, 2008

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    I really liked this, this was well written and I enjoyed your take on the prompt. Thank you for entering and good luck!

    Take care


  • chilali
    December 18, 2008

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    The last line is just amazing. A great ending. Well done and all the best to you in the contest.

    Much love,
    Ylova


  • Canadamomma
    December 17, 2008
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    i like your take on the prompt, sad yet stable
    Best of luck

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