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Mruthyunjay!

I look at the moon,
A glowing orb,
Scattering silver through the black.

Eyes see the moon,
Devoured by the dark,
The monster that dislikes silver.

Heart-broken watch I,
Evil over good.
Tradition over-thrown.

But tears never last,
For once again a glowing orb.
Scattering silver upon the dark.

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  • okadadokie
    December 24, 2008
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    this is one of those short yet deep poems. more meaning behind the words. wicked poem.

    ~Oka


  • xDemonicxAngelx
    December 18, 2008

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    I really enjoyed your take on the prompt. It was so beautiful and very well written. Thank you for entering and good luck!

    Take care


  • chilali
    December 18, 2008
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    I love the last stanza. Well done and best to you in the contest

    Much love,
    Ylova


  • Canadamomma
    December 17, 2008
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    beautifully penned
    best of luck